Tuesday, November 20, 2012

A Literary Analysis of Winter's Bone

I have done several posts about the book Winter's Bone and promised that after the due date for my final paper on the book had passed that I would post my literary analysis as written for my English class, so here it is!


A Bone to Pick

Winter’s Bone by Daniel Woodrell is a complex story that delves into the world of small town methamphetamine use and gives the reader a view from inside the situation.  Through the story of Ree Dolly, readers learn about Woodrell’s own life growing up in the Ozarks.  Woodrell paints a picture of the situation through the eyes of someone who is fighting to survive in that world, and who is deeply affected by methamphetamine, but who is not a user.  This tale of survival may be a fictional one, but the themes included in the book relate deeply to Woodrell's experience, and to the very real epidemic of small town meth use.
In an interview printed in the back of the 2007 edition of Winter’s Bone, Woodrell discusses inspiration for the novel.  Not only did he grow up in the small towns of the Ozarks where the book is set, but he had firsthand experience seeing neighbors dealing with the effects of methamphetamine addiction.  He notes that “being a good student didn’t enhance ones standing” (Woodrell 4).  The world he describes both in this discussion of his own experiences, and throughout the book is one where industry is lauded, but where the emphasis has turned from education and productivity to meth.
Methamphetamine affects everyone in a community where it is prevalent, and not just those who are users.  In a New York Times article, “Meth Building Its Hell’s Kitchen in Rural America” columnist Timothy Egan includes a quote from a Washington sheriff, “It touches every part of our lives in this county” (Egan, Para. 4).   More than once in the novel, Ree is offered meth by other characters and continues to turn it down, yet it continues to have a profound effect on her life.  She has been affected by the drug usage and meth cooking of her father because it has effectively removed him from her life for a long time, while he served time in prison, and finally at this point permanently after he turned informant.  In Methland, Nick Reding discusses at length how methamphetamine use in a small town becomes a community problem, and affects everyone.  Not only are the users affected by the physical effects, but it of course takes a toll on their relationships, and those who are involved with them both on a personal and a professional level.  Their spouses and children and parents are secondary victims, and others in the community, including those who represent the law are negatively affected as tertiary victims.
Cold that cannot be shaken is a theme of the novel that relates back to Methamphetamine.  It is a very strong metaphor not only for the difficulties that Ree faces as she looks for her father and people give her the proverbial cold shoulder, but also for the results of meth usage.  Meth raises body temperature and can actually cause hyperthermia (Reding 46).  When the body temperature drops after the drug wears off, it leaves the user feeling physically cold.  This actual cold is echoed in the bitter cold of the weather throughout the novel.  The imagery of Ree trudging through the snow in her skirt, and the wind flapping it wildly against her chapped legs, is such an important demonstration of her situation.  When she waits for hours outside of the house for someone to talk to her, only to be told to leave again, she gets colder and colder.  Anyone who has spent a length of time outside in the cold, knows how it can penetrate, how the cold surrounds and envelops a person.  The resulting cold that is felt inside is said to be a feeling of being cold to the bone.  It is a lingering chill, like the effects of methamphetamine use, not quickly or easily shaken.
The repetitive use of names in Winter’s Bone is a very noteworthy technique.  While characters all have different nicknames that people use and by which the reader knows them, many of them have the same names.  Ree’s father’s name is Jessup, one of the commonly used names in the family, and area.  This has a lot of significance, not only because of the reasons specified in the book, but because it allows it to be applied in a much broader sense.  When Ree is trying to keep her mind busy while waiting for people to speak to her about her needing help, she recites the family names.  She reflects that “to have but a few male names in use was a tactic held over from the olden knacker ways… let any sheriff or similar nabob try to keep official accounts on the Dolly men” (Woodrell 61).  The repetition of names in a broader sense is a way to make the reader feel like this could be anyone.  The town in the story could be any town, the father drawn into methamphetamine cooking, any man.  The tragedy could happen to anyone.
Methland provides perspective on  the strength of the addiction.   Reding writes about talking with a man named Roland Jarvis, who openly acknowledges that he believes his meth addiction has physically harmed his children, and that it destroyed his marriage.  He was also permanently disfigured by the burning of his meth lab while he was high, yet he can’t quit the drug.  The pull of the addiction is so strong that despite all of this, he still manages to find a way, despite horrifying physical challenges, to smoke methamphetamine.  This echoes why Jessup Dolly was willing to leave his family the way he did, and why he was willing to put up the very roof over their heads to get out of jail and back to his life as an addict and crank cook.  The draw is immense, and very well depicted through Jessup’s desperation.  Understanding that he is meant to represent so many other nameless addict victims in so many American small towns really makes his end more poignant.
Part of why methamphetamine is so pervasive in small towns is because of the slow death that these places have faced in recent years.  When an entire community relies on only one or two big businesses to employ most of its inhabitants, and then one of those businesses suddenly closes, or cuts back drastically, the failure of the town seems the only eventuality.  In Winter’s Bone this is reflected in Ree’s struggles.  Although she is only a girl, she is immersed in a world where there aren’t many jobs apparent, and people seem to have turned primarily to meth.  This happens in small towns as meth cooking can be lucrative even when, and perhaps especially, when other work opportunities slump.  Surviving is what people must do, and meth is the way for some.  In small town America, methamphetamine has become big business.  Those who still have jobs feel like they need to be the best workers possible to help them keep their jobs.  They know that if they can’t perform, there are ten other people who would gladly take their job.  This leads to meth usage because of the way it stimulates the body and allows people to work for hours without rest.  Ree faces similar challenges, fighting tirelessly in a community where no one seems to notice.
Other people in the community don’t seem to react much to Ree’s predicament in Winter’s Bone.  For the most part, it seems as if others don’t care what’s going on and that the problems being faced by this young woman are very real.  This is an excellent comment on the situation of small town methamphetamine use in America.  People don’t want to see that it’s happening, so they look right past the problem.  It is easier to not look at all than to have to face the truth and want to look away.
Instead of being a tight knit supportive community, her area has turned inside out, and people keep to themselves, afraid that their neighbors and kin might squeal.  There is such a pervasive problem with these people and their meth cooking and usage in the book that the sheriff can do little about it.  When the sheriff comes to visit Ree’s house in Winter’s Bone she is very hostile towards him.  This is not unexpected because she is a child, and to her, he is one of the men responsible for taking her father away from her on and off through her childhood.  Jessup’s history that is discussed demonstrates what typically happens in small towns where methamphetamine usage is out of control and prison space is limited.  Crank cooks, dealers and users follow a circular pattern flowing constantly in and out of custody.  Since there isn’t enough space to keep them in prison, and there isn’t funding for treatment, they end up continually cycling through the system. 
One of the ways the methamphetamine use is demonstrated in the book is in the most basic way that outsiders can see and understand; the direct physical repercussions.  The extreme effect of meth that readers might be familiar with from the news,  when a lab goes up, is demonstrated when Ree’s relative takes her to a house that was burned out by a meth fire.  He tells her that it is the last place her dad was seen.  The possible death of Ree’s father in this kind of scenario doesn’t seem to surprise her other than that she insists that her father was known for “never… cookin’ bad batches” (Woodrell 75).  This really brings home the feeling of safety that people develop when they are familiar with this type of life.  To Ree, people die in these types of accidents, but not her father.  It has been long enough since the house burned, as evidenced by weeds growing inside, that it is impossible that that particular fire killed Jessup, but her response to the prospect of that end for him is important.
Winter’s Bone goes further, and not only covers the possibility of death in a meth lab fire, but also what can happen if meth cooking goes wrong and the cook survives.  The disfigurement of Ree’s uncle Teardrop is described in detail in the book.  Although it doesn’t seem very central to the plot of the story, Woodrell spends quite a bit of time on this detail.  The purpose of this description is not only to provide the reader a feel for the character from his physical appearance, but to haunt us with the effects that meth can have on people.  Despite the fire that melted his face and neck, Teardrop continues to use methamphetamine.  His character represents the darkest part of methamphetamine, and he is characterized by the disfigurement and continually uses the description, his “melted side” (Woodrell 110).  The description seems a bit extreme until put into context against a description in Methland of how a similar burn happened to a non-fictitious crank cook.(Reding 43)  This type of disfigurement from burns sustained during the burning of a meth lab, are very real.  And as demonstrated in Methland, even they are not enough to curb the addiction. (Reding 14)  Uncle Teardrop is much more complex than just being the embodiment of the evil side of meth.  The character is representative of the struggle that all chronic meth users face.  On the one side he has the physical scars of meth, and on the other side he still looks like himself.  He faces addiction, rage, and all the other evils of his drug usage, yet there is still the side of him that loves his brother and his niece.  His namesake tattoos are described as “done in jailhouse ink (falling) in a row from the corner of the eye on his scarred side” (Woodrell 24).  Uncle Teardrop the meth addict is forever crying. 
There remains contention over the use of methamphetamine is small town America.  Although meth is known as a blue collar drug, the idea that it could be so pervasive in the towns that built America is a difficult reality.  We see them nostalgically, as the foothold of the American dream of hard work being the makings of success.  Winter’s Bone illustrates what is happening in these towns, and demonstrates for the reader not simply how widespread the epidemic is, but how it is affecting whole communities, not just users.  On the surface, Winter’s Bone is the story of Ree Dolly who is struggling to find her father to save her house and provide for her younger brothers and disabled mother.  But when we go deeper, it is really a story of methamphetamine, how strong its pull is, and how it is destroying people and lives in small town America.



Works Cited
Egan, Timothy.” Meth Building Its Hell’s Kitchen in Rural America.” The New York Times,

Reding, Nick. Methland. New York: Bloomsbury, 2009. Print.

Woodrell, Daniel. Winter's Bone. New York: Back Bay Books, 2006. Print.

Tuesday, November 13, 2012

Like Water for Chocolate

From Amazon.com
For one of my classes this semester, one of the assigned readings was "Like Water for Chocolate" by Laura Esquivel I will start out by being completely honest.  This book was an assigned reading for one of my classes, and while I appreciate it's literary value, I hated it.  Okay, that that is over with, I definitely feel like there is merit in reading this book, and that it is an important piece of contemporary literature.

G. Whittaker Oct 2012
The book was critically acclaimed, and met with much initial resistance in the American market.  I can certainly understand why this was so.  The story contains elements of Mexican culture that are somewhat foreign to outsiders.  This could server to limit the appeal of the book.  It is also very much a soap opera.  This aspect of it was probably the most disappointing for me.  Every time I hoped things were going in some normal direction for the relationship between he characters there was new drama.

G. Whittaker 10-2012
Another important aspect of the book is the use of magical realism.  This craft melds tall tale elements into the story.  I personally, have never liked tall tales, so this was something of a turn off for me.  This is really an important part of the story however, and is a critical literary method to understand.  Magical realism was coined by a German man, who initially used it to describe a genre of art, however it became a popular literary tool with Hispanic authors who felt that it was a way to blend traditional, cultural mysticism with contemporary mainstream writing methods.  Magical elements are added to the story but in a way that they are consistent with a much more real atmosphere.  Authors offer no explanation for the magical events, as readers are to take at face value.  If the magic were explained it would take away from what it adds to the work, and might call other elements into question.  Instead we are to view the events as if the magic is a natural part of the otherwise unremarkable setting.  In this book the magic all stems from the main character Tita and primarily from her cooking.  It's an interesting idea and really conveys how food can transcend so many barriers.  Perhaps it could have the magical effects described.

I certainly understand how the things that I didn't like about this book, combined with the fact that the author is a woman, could have made it difficult for it to be accepted as influential literature.  Although there are increasing numbers of female authors, that doesn't mean that we always view or understand the work of male and female authors equally.  I have no preference as far as the gender of the authors I choose to read, but realistically we live in a world were women's literature is still not on par with that of men.  That's not to say that women aren't just as skilled writers, but that their writing style and perspective are different, and since it is one with which we are not as familiar, there are times when this can hinder the acceptance of a work.  In the case of "Like Water for Chocolate"

G. Whittaker 10-2012
Despite the early rocky reception that the book received, it was subsequently made into a major motion picture produced by Miramax.  A trailer for the movie can be viewed here, or rented here for $1.99.  Though I haven't yet had a chance to view the film, I certainly plan to do so.  I'm always interested to see how film adaptations vary from the books from which they come.  I also think that in the case of this book, the film will help to bring to life many of the elements of life in Mexico in that period, and some of the more subtle things that are going on within the book.

There are some very clear themes in the book and commentary on tradition.  Tradition is a very big part of the novel and something with which the protagonist struggles.  She holds fast to culinary tradition and puts a lot of stock in it.  She also feel very strongly about her duty to her family.  But this comes into conflict with her own desires and the changing times.  Tita embodies the struggle between traditionalism and progressiveness.  Although she continues in her prescribed role within the family, the passion that is magically exuded through her food leads her sister, Gertrudis to run away and join the revolutionaries, taking on a completely modern and progressive role.  Tita's struggle with who she is and how that fits into her ideas of her family, cultural, and gender rolls continues until the end of the novel.

Although I didn't care for this book, I would recommend it as an important piece of cultural and women's lit. Despite my lack of enjoyment, I was compelled to continue reading the book not only because it was assigned but also because I was interested to see where it would lead.  It is well crafted, and takes the reader on a very cultural journey back in time where we learn not only about revolutionary Mexico, but a little about ourselves in the process.

Friday, November 9, 2012

Slice of PIE

We were assigned to submit our final big paper for the semester for review through the tutoring program offered by the college.  I had never used a service like this, but was hopeful that it would help me to really improve my paper.  I have to say I was really disappointed with the experience.
Editing your paper can take it's toll, peer review can help avoid Jello brain!
G. Whittaker 10-2009

Typically when I write papers, I go through several drafts.  I start out by just writing.  Then I will move things around and reorganize the paper.  I'll move whole paragraphs around in the paper, and do quite a bit of rewriting.  I don't really think of this as different draft forms, but more as an evolving paper.

Revising is something that is very important to the writing process.  No one is ever going to write something perfectly the first time.  Writing doesn't happen that way.  We may have great ideas the first time, but they can always be refined.  There are always opportunities to make ideas clearer to the reader, and to check spelling and grammar in our work.  Sometimes we write something thinking it is fantastic, but once we look back at it we wonder how we ever wrote it.  There have certainly been times that I read over a sentence in my work that makes absolutely no sense.  Especially if I hot it in a rewriting and ended up fusing two sentences together.  As part of this process I usually as a family member to peer review for me, which helps immensely!  (Thanks mom!!!) Having a different point of view is extremely helpful because someone else can help catch mistakes that you don't, and they can point out areas where things are confusing, or awkward in your work.

Very pretty, but it's not PIE!
G. Whittaker 3-2010
Now, back to that online tutor review.  On the submission form there is a box where you can tell them specifically what you would like help on.  I asked that they look closely at my parenthetical citations, and make sure they were formatted correctly, and for input on how well my paper's paragraphs followed the PIE format.  My instructor reminded me of the PIE format on a previous paper and suggested I use this guide to help make sure that my work stayed on target.  I expected that it might take some time to hear back from the online tutor.  I heard back within an hour, and was very surprised.  I received an email that said:
In the copy attached, I have noted corrections for your parenthetical cites and works cited page.  You have a really strong argument, although I am not familiar with the PIE format you mention.  Great job on this essay!."
 Really?  A tutor for an English 102 class that isn't familiar with the PIE form?  I might expect other students to not know it, (I had to look it up myself as a review when my instructor has mentioned it to me,) but the the tutor?  If you are not familiar with PIE, a good overview is available here.  The online tutor was a great help with the technical aspects of MLA.  For that I am very thankful, but those were the only comments in the attachment.  I would have really preferred to have more constructive criticism.  I am very glad that I submitted a partial draft to my instructor previously, and that I have my family reviewer(s) to help me out on this one!  Don't get me wrong, I appreciate the nice comments from the tutor, but they simply don't help me to improve my paper.

I plan on making the citation changes that the tutor indicated, as well as working on some structural and content comments that my instructor made on my skeletal draft.  I tried to keep those things in mind already while completing the paper, but will be rereading it again with those specific things in mind as well.